Scottie, Is there not a time to write and a time to rewrite? At least in my experience, if the critical eye is not put to bed and the creative flow let loose, I get nowhere. Of course, I must return to cut and shape and insert and cut again but, initially, it must find its way to page. Take of your critical hat once and a while. You may enjoy the show. Steven Gallagher Scottie Bowman wrote: > When a writer has > a technique that I wish to emulate or steal from - like old man Hem, > or Graham Greene, for example - I can't stop myself getting out > the microscope. But immediately, something is lost forever. > The willing suspension of disbelief is no longer possible. Just as > too many films about the life & machinery backstage have destroyed > any enjoyment I might have had in the `living theatre', so I can't > really ever again get that tingle up my spine when I read about > Pilar's young days in Valencia, or Jake Barnes walk down a street > in Paris on a spring morning - because I now understand rather > too well how it's done. > > Scottie B.