Greetings fellow J.D. Salinger nuts! This is my first e-mail to this list, so I guess I am getting off to a bad starting by beginning it all by sending a piece of my writing... :-) However, this essay that I wrote for my English class I do beleive might be of interest to at least one person in this group. Even if you are not interested in this, you STILL can help me out by giving me some more ideas... This is due tommorow, so I seriously doubt that I will receive that many ideas, but what the hey... I personally really don't think that this is a good piece if writing on my part, I certainly have written better than this, so if you decide to totally trash me for this, I will understand... :-) - Ian Mayes _______________________________________________________ Love or Squalor? The story "For Esme - With Love and Squalor" by J.D. Salinger is considered his best story ( Kazin 50) and the best story within the "9 Stories" collection ( Lundquist 112). It is also said that this is Salinger's "first explicit statement of what is wrong with his heroes." ( Wiegand 129). However, whether this story is focused on "love" or "squalor" has never been commonly agreed upon. For all the depressing notions and sad turns of events, there seems to be equally as many positive notions and events, both of which play a vital part within this story. It is my belief that this story symbolizes "love" and it's influence within human life. To begin, let's examine the negative qualities within this story. The life-less choir led by the dissonant choir coach, the deaths of both of Esme and Charles's parents, the near-death of Esme's aunt, the nervous breakdown and sickness of Sergeant X, the "animality" of Americans, the blatant insensitivity of Sergeant X's brother, Corporal Clay and Bulling, the depressing "squalid" atmosphere of the house in Bavaria and the omnipresent atmosphere of World War II certainly gives the entire story a certain dark "squalid" feel to it. The scene is certainly not helped when "Clay's insensitive girl-friend, Loretta, a psychology major, blames Sergeant X's breakdown not on the war but on a lifelong instability and yet excuses Clay's sadistic act of killing of a cat as 'temporary insanity' brought on by the war." (French 99-100) These aspects certainly appear to beat Sergeant X down to nothingness and leave him seemingly on the edge of yet another nervous breakdown. The final crushing blow to X's inner psyche appears to arrive when he reads the inscription in a German book "Dear God, life is hell." ( Salinger 105). Yet, Sergeant X is still able to withstand this and is even able to respond to it. Eventually X is able to write a quote from Dostoevsky underneath the previous inscription "Fathers and teachers, I ponder 'What is hell?" I maintain that it is the suffering of being unable to love." (Salinger 105) It is precisely at that moment where most critics say that the notion of "love" clearly enters this story and that the core issues in this story that are behind X and all humanity are indicated. Also, by the very fact that Sergeant X was able to respond like that, perhaps we can view the negative statement, maybe even the entire cast of negative events within this story, as being ultimately a positive constructive force. However, immediately after Sergeant X inscribes his Dostoevsky quote, X notices that his writing is almost entirely illegible and that all his work and effort has been useless against this personal psychological assault on him. As a result, Sergeant X does not acquire the "God of redemption" (129) that William Wiegard says he needs. After that point Corporal Clay enters the room by banging the door open. This first act by him is followed by many others that show Clay as being an insensitive, and even hateful individual. It is this behavior which leads many critics to believing that Clay represents these aspects of life. Where Clay represents the negative hateful aspects of life, Robert Browne contends that Esme, Charles, and Sergeant X represent the loving aspects of life. For example, Browne points to the instances where Charles wants to kiss Sergeant X good-bye despite all his previous rude actions, Esme's desire to be more compassionate and the fact that Esme notes that X has an "extremely sensitive face" ( Salinger 95) as showing how these three characters have escaped the hell that Dostoevsky spoke of. (149-150) Warren French takes the notions that Browne comes up with and expands upon them by saying, Just before the appearance of his much acclaimed novel, The Catcher in the Rye, Salinger succeeded in creating in Esme and in Corporal Clay perfect personifications of the "nice" and the "phony" worlds as he envisioned them; he also recorded one of the rare victories of the "nice" over the "phony." (100) French later goes on to explain how he feels that beneath the hardened tormented exteriors of Esme, Charles and Sergeant X are compassionate hearts whereas beneath the "smiling 'photogenic' surface" of Corporal Clay there is a "spiritual void." ( 101) With Sergeant X representing love and Corporal Clay representing hate, a "spiritual void" so to speak, then we can view the fact that they fought together in World War II and rode the same jeep together as representing the combined essences of love and hate working together to form Humanity's existence. Taking this notion that Esme, Charles, and Sergeant X represent love, we can see how it applies to a broader human context. For example, Ihad Hassan says that "the horrendous social fact of our century and the outstanding spiritual motive of the age - genocide and love - are united in the history of a single American soldier, Staff Sergeant X." (148) George Steiner later goes on to bring this notion down to a more personal level. Steiner is quoted as saying that "For Esme - With Love and Squalor" is "perhaps the best study to come out of the war of the way in which the greater facts of hatred play havoc in the private soul." ( 83) James Lundquist then runs with the idea of the story representing the private soul by illustrating how Zen Buddhism plays a part. For example, Lundquist points out how Charles' riddle represents the process of how one is supposed to search for answers, how the statement made by the Nazi in the German book is nothing but dead-end propaganda, (100-101) and even how the meeting in the tea house is symbolic of a Buddhist tea ceremony. (112) Therefore, we can take all these notions derived from the events in this story and see how they all end up representing a quest for love and spiritual growth. Basically it ends up as a "good vs. evil" dichotomy. Charles, Esme, and Sergeant X representing the "good" aspects of love and spiritual fulfillment and Corporal Clay representing the "evil" aspects of hatred, insensitivity, and "phony." And we can see how through the ending events of this story, how ultimately an act of "love" from Esme can win the inner struggle against "Squalor." Works Cited Browne, Robert M. "In Defense of Esme." J. D. Salinger and the Critics. Eds. William F. Belcher and James W. Lee. Belmont, California: Wadsworth, 1964. 149-150. French, Warren. J. D. Salinger. Boston: G. K. Hall, 1976. Hassan, Ihab. "The Rare Quixotic Gesture." Salinger: A Critical and Personal Portrait. Ed. Henry Anatole Grunwald. New York: Harper, 1963. 138-163. Kazin, Alfred. "Everybody's Favorite." Salinger: A Critical and Personal Portrait. Ed. Henry Anatole Grunwald. New York: Harper, 1963. 43-52. Lundquist, James. J. D. Salinger. New York: Fredrick Ungar, 1979. Salinger, J. D. "For Esme - With Love and Squalor." Nine Stories. New York: Bantam, 1964. Steiner, George. "The Salinger Industry." Salinger: A Critical and Personal Portrait. Ed. Henry Anatole Grunwald. New York: Harper, 1963. 82-85. Wiegand, William. "The Knighthood of J. D. Salinger." Salinger: A Critical and Personal Portrait. Ed. Henry Anatole Grunwald. New York: Harper, 1963. 116-136. _________________________________________________________ DO YOU YAHOO!? Get your free @yahoo.com address at http://mail.yahoo.com