open spaces


Subject: open spaces
From: Scottie Bowman (rbowman@indigo.ie)
Date: Fri Jan 26 2001 - 05:26:47 GMT


    I feel just as strongly about the white spaces in
    & around writing.

    Do the great style manuals say anything about
    the matter? People talk so much - & quite rightly
    - about 'ear' but I can't say I ever heard much about
    the need for an 'eye'. Yet it seems to me that the actual
    length of the lines within the frame of the page,
    the way they cluster together, the deliberate breaking
    of any monotony in the pattern of expository paragraphs
    as they alternate with lines of dialogue, & so on -
    all contribute very powerfully to the way the reader
    takes in the actual content (indeed, whether he takes it in
    at all.)

    And if you all care so much about it, why does no one -
    EXCEPT ME - make any attempt to shape their e-mails?
    There's only one other guy I've ever come across (& he
    on the Austen list) who - in sure & certain emulation
    of myself - indents his stuff with the courtesy & fastidiousness
    of a proper writer. You open his stuff & are at once
    drawn into it with a lightened & expectant heart.

    As opposed to the sinking spirits induced by the average
    presentation: no margins, no capitalisations, no paragraphs,
    just one endless anaconda of undifferentiated words.

    Scottie B.

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