RE: the body of poetry; coming through the rye

From: Yocum Daniel GS 21 CES/CEOE <daniel.yocum@Peterson.af.mil>
Date: Tue Jul 01 2003 - 10:25:15 EDT

OK Scottie;

THE EPIC NARRATIVE

A whimsy musing or fleeting thought
in such a small place is all that's sought

no room for Homer or even Longfellow
but languid melancholy, words so mellow

to concentrate we don't know how
the sound bite has forced down the brow

story, plot, and line is VANQUISHED!
and the heart and mind lies in anguish

the three minute soap box on the corner
has made the muser a lonesome sojourner

the hoary mold has been broken
the current mode merely a token

raise the voice, lyrical with meter in rhyme
this neglected path will stand the test of time

Daniel
some desire mercy over sacrifice but here is a pound of flesh

    I can't help it. Each time I open a contribution to the poetry
    discussion I keep seeing Professor Tulp's Anatomy Lesson.
    There they are: all of them in their beards & ruffs; John in his big
    black hat, one hand holding the forceps, the other raised in exquisite
    definition; Jim bent forward peering at the corpse's genitals; Dan
    looking out at the rest of us in honest bafflement. The only one
    missing is Kim in her maid's pinny, holding the bucket for slops.

    The thing is, chaps, I think he may still be alive. Before discussing
    the extensor digiti minimus you should try a little mouth-to-mouth.
    It's rather nauseating of course & can often end in embarrassment,
    but if one - or all - of you just bent down & risked your own breath
    you might, you never know, inspire him back to life. Worth a try.
    We won't laugh.

    As Miss Doolittle 'sang': 'Don't talk at all. Show me.'

    Scottie B.
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