improved - 76%

Scottie Bowman (rbowman@indigo.ie)
Fri, 09 Jul 1999 23:34:27 +0100 

    '... If you deem it important to use standards 
    of writing associated with grown-ups, maybe you 
    should also consider standards of behavior ...'

    Now.   Doesn't that read SO much better?

    Well done.

    Scottie B.