Slab Of Words

I was backing out of my long driveway and noticed Michael sitting in the
dirt of the our long road which our house is the only one and he was staring
into the dirt with a razor blade in his hand, I got out of my car and
watched him. He was cutting the heads off of each ant which emerged from
its hole. Ant'O'cide, the meticulous assination of an entire community one
mandibled head at a time.
Daniel

sundeep! very nice to speak with you again...if you don't remember me,
i believe we traded texts via mail long ago...the uncut hammy bio for a
couple of salinger/buddhism texts i couldn't find...?

still, the sentence doesn't feel right. "after which regrettably
ostentatious experience" doesn't feel right. after which
regrettably...it's going to haunt me. i understand what the
"regrettably ostentatious experience is referring to...just, i don't get
the usage of the word "which" before those three words...is it decent
sentence formation or is it missing a "the" or am i just refusing to
believe there may be a sentence in the english language that i can't
wrap my 101 mind around?

>>> sundeep@outlookindia.com 06/13/03 10:04AM >>>
> "You will recall, quite with my undying, humorous sympathy, that at
least
three of your children, in sheer independence of each other, and utterly
untaught, have picked up the delicate custom of spinning the body around
with alarming speed, after which regrettably ostentatious experience the
person who does the whirling can often, though not always, by any means,
arrive at a decision or an impressive answer to a problem, usually quite
small."
>
> Should there be a different word for "which"...? or should it read
"with
alarming speed which, after each regrettably ostentatious experience the
person who does the whirling can often"...? Or am I just not
understanding
a word...?

Michael,

The original sentence reads fine -- he is merely referring to the
"delicate
custom of spinning the body around with alarming speed" as a
"regrettably
ostentatious experience".

Thought would step in before Scottie feels constrained to repeat an
earlier
mail almost in its entirety.

Sonny

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