RE: One of Seymour's poems... edited

daniel, thanks for your explanation below! never knew
that.

by the way, in japanese haikus, are there rhymes?
metrics?

bowing to the master,

(this is not tongue-in-cheek),

kim

ps: i find you incredibly creative in many of your
posts. my only thought is that you might benefit from
a genius shawn-like editor.

--- Yocum Daniel GS 21 CES/CEOE
<daniel.yocum@Peterson.af.mil> wrote:
> The master poet would improvise a standard haiku and
> the nobility present
> usually Samurai would reply and try to bend the mood
> of the poem, preferably
> with an ironic or in a paradoxical fashion. They
> say that modern Haiku is
> just
> the masters prompt awaiting the students reply, of
> course all rooted in the
> mood of observation (you know, Zen like) and
> countered with personality, the
> game a sort of clash between being and non-being.
> Daniel
>
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kim Johnson [mailto:haikux2@yahoo.com]
> Sent: Friday, June 20, 2003 3:24 PM
> To: bananafish@roughdraft.org
> Subject: RE: One of Seymour's poems...
>
>
> daniel, please elucidate.
> thanks,
> kim
>
> --- Yocum Daniel GS 21 CES/CEOE
> <daniel.yocum@Peterson.af.mil> wrote:
> > And in the traditional court game it was 575 77,
> > with the last 14 turning
> > the first 17.
> > Daniel
> >
> >
> >
> >
>
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