Here are a few of my works. I would SINCERELY appreciate any comments...e= ven=0Athe negative ones. I would love soem criticism...or even what you D= O like=0Aabout what I have written. I have been workling on poetry for th= e last 5=0Ayears. I still feel very much like a beginner...but hope I pro= ve somewhat=0Ainteresting... =09=09=09=09=09=09=09=09=09Angie -- thanks!! ******************************************************* 1989 Skinny-legged boys bombarded me when I was twelve (and flowering) I had to lock my door with double bolts I had to hide behind mothers and excuses. Like twigs, their legs were arm-size, but could run like Hell on the playground in swarms storming the front lines of my laced bottom dress. I'd be out of breath hunted by pimple-faced marriage proposals and skinned-up knock-knees. that clang on jungle-jims in the blazing heats I wear skirts just to drive =91em a little wild. I was a harlequin I may have been a twelve year old playground tramp I always had my way with the fourth grade men and took all my friend's pretend boyfriends. I would run with the boy's hearts and they would chase me to get them back but I never tripped over pants or manliness- and that is a fact. ****************************************************************** no title Bad company is those men that walk downtown in torn shirts with long hair and 2.00 in their pockets for a pack of cigarettes They smoke Marlboro REDS. I couldn't handle ultra-lights. Lock your car doors little girls and boys. We don't like to see those men on the loose and it is so damn late at night as weak as we are we couldn't possibly put up a fight besides men like that carry guns or knives or ropes or candlesticks but Honey, even if they don't they have fists. Don't look them in the eye. Don't let them think you know they are there Men like that should be taken off the streets and put in word-processing jobs with ties and white ironed shirts because that is what they really want, dear. Everyone should have that chance, right? I am ashamed to Care so much. But Hell, I am an American And it is our job. to put up with these men and give them welfare enough to buy new shirts (without holes) and enough to make us feel good when we shutter as we pass downtowns in every metropolis and small burg in the world. Help us cope with the let-down. ***************************************************************** no title When things move for her they move She accepts no substitutes draws her curtains closed hides from the men and tightens her clothes Ruin a vacation by being the one to never show She takes dreams and makes them horror stories by campfires and decides that decision is best left, undone. Life falls apart on weekdays she works weekends If time is constant she brakes records she measures ingredients out in touches and believes that heaven is loneliness Forgive her simple charm but dark, cavernous galaxies find no more depth then the span of her arms and the reach of her breath Eyes that leave streaks of rose lipstick on your lips never having kissed and she loved twice in one day but only in the second hour. and she hated sunlight till it was near the witching hour. Hands that are molding clay taking forms of moving skin and wakes to smiles of her lovely sin. Fires in her background, still envelops her days yet she locks the doors after lovers and moves with organized sways. ******************************************************************* no title Rambling What word brings life to the dead and cold at heart? The unwilling, the childish, youthful pranks. Too old to be young and too young to understand what exists with water and its pals. the little man in a ship on the way to a wetter land on his way to a better land. And a happy time that smiles at the sun sunshuns and that is a true story told to me by a little bird that rambled life like an old fisherman that caught himself trying to succeed with the aborigines. *************************************************************************= ** Wine for Breakfast Love is the sweetness of his appled lips I have eaten my love on cold Mondays with bowls of soup not having dressed yet but just waking to love with the sunset My hair ain't combed ain't been brushed your smile is light and I am flushed I don't need no man in my life but you ain't just no man. Sunlight is a shade when you are near. Time moves with the molasses of trees. I break down when I hear you breath and I hold my breaths when you are here. Ain't looking for no love affair. damn you and what you do to me. He being my personal Valentino in Paris not the taste of sunkist but of wine A bitter chablieaux A timid merlot or perhaps, my love, there is no wine at all. I believe if I were to ask him to marry He would become an account in Fresno I, a professional something another Living in in living rooms with only the furnitures of dust to wear. Love being a timed race with no starting gate And time being adrift I float with it I didn't bet to lose but i never bet on fate and the air is a breath not a breeze Mornings come cold to me and I have lost my appetite for men that taste so sweet for my pain is the tart.=0A