True Sweet You teach people not to write with cute modifiers or at least knot too may of them Stay with those nouns not letting them get naughty or lost to the pieces too many hyena adjectives snatch away lost sentences dead, not like a period punctuating a safe night of white space And please Professor Self, not too much "to" be verb use, you know in your heart you beat active, always more alive when giving rhythm meaning Ahh...Buddy, it's not only for tense that these online words should have a future perfect will hochman