RE: buddy
WILL HOCHMAN (hochman@uscolo.edu)
Mon, 10 Nov 1997 08:07:54 -0700 (MST)
True Sweet
You teach people
not to write
with cute modifiers
or at least
knot too may of them
Stay with those nouns
not letting them
get naughty
or lost to the pieces
too many hyena
adjectives
snatch away
lost sentences
dead, not
like a period
punctuating
a safe night
of white space
And please
Professor Self,
not too much
"to" be verb use,
you know in your heart
you beat active,
always more alive
when giving rhythm
meaning
Ahh...Buddy,
it's not only
for tense
that these online words
should have
a future perfect
will hochman