> At 17:27 11/18/98 -0500, J J R (Jim) wrote: > > >>The game me, Matt and, eh, various others were playing was, > "How would we > >>read Bananafish if we were coming to it for the first > time--without ever > >>having read anything about Seymour?" > >>[...] > > G.H.G.A.Paterson wrote: > >So let us carry our two possibilities for Seymour through the > end of > >the story. I had never thought of the encounter in the > elevator as an > >attempt to treat the adult woman as he has been treating > children, but > >the observation seems to me to work very well. Then, when > Seymour shoots > >himself, we understand why (He can't stand living here anymore) > but the > >apparent premeditation of this act seems confusing. If he was > considering > >suicide, why didn't he get it over with at home? Why didn't he > just swim > >out to sea (as Edna Pontelier does to end her poisonous > relationship in > >Kate Chopin's _Awakening_)? Why would he have planned a > suicide so far > >in advance, and in such a bizarre setting? We feel for > Seymour, but his > >situation leaves us confused. > > >If we take the second route, and dismiss Seymour as a maniac, > we are even > >more confused. What began Seymour's foot fetish? If he had a > full clip in > >the gun, why didn't he pop Muriel a few times before blowing > himself away? > >For that matter, why not kill her off and run for the hills? > Committing > >suicide without first committing what would have probably been > a gratifying > >murder is even more confusing than what caused the insanity to > begin with. > > >So I guess in a long winded way, where I was going with this > was, on my > >first reading of this story, I was left totally dumbfounded. > > Ditto. I'm going to break the rules of the game and bring other > stories into this, so I'll apologize at the outset. I'd like to offer > another viewpoint of Seymour: that of a man, convinced that his work > was done in this "appearance," unable to adapt to what he had become. > > And he couldn't stand living as the man that he had become. Is it just shell-shock? In RHtR,C, Buddy mentions in passing that Seymour had been spending the last several months with Oppenheim. (For where else could a boy genius grown be best used in the war effort but in helping to develop the atomic bomb?) Makes me wonder what is left unsaid... Is it that Seymour has simply gone crazy or maybe more than that? Can he stand to live with the consequences of his wartime occupation? "I can see you're looking at my feet," he says. But is it really a foot fetish? Or is it the way that he's already examining and reexamining every facet of his existence? Seymour would never do anything without examining it from every angle. Or is it just another manifestation of his same obsessive need to watch trees? Or any number of tiny compulsive behaviors that Muriel has apparently been sharing with her mother? He's not a maniac, he's merely convinced himself that he's done everything that he needed to do and is no longer of any use to his family. He'd done all that he could for the younger Glass children: they'd already been educated and shaped; they had only to continue their own training. As far as he was concerned, he was no longer needed. Think about it: the ghost of Seymour that haunts the rest of the stories is not who he was at the end of his life. It's the pre-war Seymour who taught them what books to read, who made them shine their shoes for the fat lady, who played ping pong badly. Believing that he has more "appearances" to come, why shouldn't Seymour end it now, when it has become clear to him that there is nothing to salvage from this lifetime? Long-winded for a first posting, I know... Cecilia Baader.