1) Esme says more about war in it's use of silence and deep, unspoken love than most other things ever written about war. (you can quote me on that!) 2) The issue of criticism and reading salinger is not automatically phony because an author tends to not like his critics...criticism is a valid art and if it is done well, it won't be phony, and if it is done poorly, it will be phony ...it's probably wise to follow seymour's advice and write with all your stars out...will