Re: rats...

No, they weren't said, Cecilia, but they were certainly "intimated."
Something about the tone in your description. I would start over and give you
definites, but I'm pretty sure you wouldn't listen...

which is always your perogative, as a writer, just as I have perogatives as a
reader.

Jim

Cecilia Baader wrote:

> --- Jim Rovira <jrovira@drew.edu> wrote:
> >
> > I could have gone into more detail. Probably something about the guy
> > who
> > dumps the girl having to be "evil" or "bad" or "twisted" or "selfish" in
> > some way, and not just a normal guy (or a normally selfish guy) who just
> > happens to not be interested in the female protagonist in quite that
> > way.
>
> Um, did you read the same thing that I wrote? Because none of those
> things were said, or even intimated, about him. Start over, Jim, and this
> time, concentrate.
>
> Best,
> Cecilia.
>
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