Re: One of Seymour's poems...

From: Kim Johnson <haikux2@yahoo.com>
Date: Fri Jun 20 2003 - 14:11:15 EDT

i'm very impressed with the bananafish offerings re
the seymour poem.

not to be a humbug, but:

a double-haiku should have the following syllables per
line:

575 575

(it's easier to criticize than create.)

i'm still fussing with/polishing mine.

kim

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Received on Fri Jun 20 14:11:16 2003

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