Re: One of Seymour's poems...

"bored" included: i think i'm done. head hurting.

young widower sits - 5
upon his suburban lawn - 7
spying the full moon - 5
bored miss white cat comes - 5
rolls over and with blessing - 7
bites on his left hand - 5

>>> ANELLO Michael J 06/20/03 12:11PM >>>
very pretty! praise? way more warming than mine.

criticisms? buddy says the cat's a "she." the moon is "full." dammit, i forgot that cat was "bored." back to the drawing board...
cat was kingpin before wife. hm...

>>> ErsatzAzalea@aol.com 06/20/03 12:04PM >>>

refurbished.

only his nightclothes 5
and moon for a widower 7
on his dew-soaked lawn. 5
abandoned white cat 5
who approaches, rolls over, 7
bites an offered palm. 5

~melanie

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Received on Fri Jun 20 15:14:06 2003