Re: One of Seymour's poems...

From: Michael J ANELLO <Michael.J.Anello@state.or.us>
Date: Fri Jun 20 2003 - 15:36:55 EDT

warm and perfect. why dew soaked though? the full moon should imply night time...just wondering. yours makes mine look like a turd. hey! still no "left" hand! come back here! :)

>>> ErsatzAzalea@aol.com 06/20/03 12:34PM >>>

last attempt

> only his nightclothes 5
> >and full moon for a widow 7
> >on his dew-soaked lawn. 5
 white cat, bored mistress 5
> slow approaches, rolls over, 7
> >bites an offered palm. 5
> >
>

~melanie

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