RE: One of Seymour's poems...

From: Yocum Daniel GS 21 CES/CEOE <daniel.yocum@Peterson.af.mil>
Date: Fri Jun 20 2003 - 16:42:41 EDT

And in the traditional court game it was 575 77, with the last 14 turning
the first 17.
Daniel

i'm very impressed with the bananafish offerings re
the seymour poem.

not to be a humbug, but:

a double-haiku should have the following syllables per
line:

575 575

(it's easier to criticize than create.)

i'm still fussing with/polishing mine.

kim

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Received on Fri Jun 20 16:44:05 2003

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