Re: One of Seymour's poems...

From: Michael J ANELLO <Michael.J.Anello@state.or.us>
Date: Fri Jun 20 2003 - 15:10:54 EDT

very pretty! praise? way more warming than mine.

criticisms? buddy says the cat's a "she." the moon is "full." dammit, i forgot that cat was "bored." back to the drawing board...
cat was kingpin before wife. hm...

>>> ErsatzAzalea@aol.com 06/20/03 12:04PM >>>

refurbished.

only his nightclothes 5
and moon for a widower 7
on his dew-soaked lawn. 5
abandoned white cat 5
who approaches, rolls over, 7
bites an offered palm. 5

~melanie

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