RE: One of Seymour's poems...

From: Yocum Daniel GS 21 CES/CEOE <daniel.yocum@Peterson.af.mil>
Date: Thu Jun 26 2003 - 17:18:07 EDT

OK Kim, drop the polish rag, let's see it.
Daniel

i'm very impressed with the bananafish offerings re
the seymour poem.

not to be a humbug, but:

a double-haiku should have the following syllables per
line:

575 575

(it's easier to criticize than create.)

i'm still fussing with/polishing mine.

kim
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Received on Thu Jun 26 17:19:47 2003

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