RE: One of Seymour's poems...

daniel, i wondered when you would call me on this. and
so timely voiced.

would you believe me, that after reading melanie's
(and making some minor editorial suggestions), and
then re-reading mine, mine stank . . . and i tore it
up?

would you believe i've torn up everything i've ever
written?

(not that it was much--either in quantity or quality.)

no doubt this reflexive action denotes the muse
doesn't really visit.

one is left being a picky reader. at best.

envious of your fecund creativity,

kim

 
--- Yocum Daniel GS 21 CES/CEOE
<daniel.yocum@Peterson.af.mil> wrote:
> OK Kim, drop the polish rag, let's see it.
> Daniel
>
>
>
>
> i'm very impressed with the bananafish offerings re
> the seymour poem.
>
> not to be a humbug, but:
>
> a double-haiku should have the following syllables
> per
> line:
>
> 575 575
>
> (it's easier to criticize than create.)
>
> i'm still fussing with/polishing mine.
>
> kim
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Received on Thu Jun 26 17:36:10 2003